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Questionable Existance

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The broken doll
is the little girl
that's trapped inside
her father's world
of murder and mayhem
of pain and pleasure
and all she wants
is to win the game
to outplay his women
and outlast his men
she's but hanging on
by a single thread
now dangling near
the sweet abyss
in reckless danger
she seeks her bliss
to go down
in flame and glory
in smoke and rage
and all she wants
is to win the game.
Ok, I got the idea after watching CSI last night. It was the one where Grissom finds the little doll on the picture frame. Then the rest just popped into my head, I guess. And yes, this actually rhymes. Somewhat. Big change for Amanda.

AND I submitted this now to celebrate my leaving for vacation tomorrow! I'm sorry, but I soooo can't wait!

I'll probably add more to this, but since I couldn't decide if I was or not, I am putting it in my deviations.

So. woo!
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Hey honey, I love it.

IDK if you'll see this, but call me if you do, at my dad's it's 599 4531.

ILY.